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Drew The Destroyer's avatar

I always make my audio different from the writing too. It's more fun that way.

morgan's avatar

this is SO good. imagery and metaphors go crazy.

Ramona Moth's avatar

So kind thank u Morgan 🤍

Sidney Lawson's avatar

Very nice

Gary L Taylor's avatar

Fantastic. You almost feel that and are pulled into it as much as reading it. I loved it.

Ramona Moth's avatar

I appreciate that so much thank u

Ellis Wiens's avatar

Who would be daring enough to enter Ramona Moth’s refrigerator?

jordan :p's avatar

4D Substack

Ramona Moth's avatar

thank u this is my dream & goal

Lioaurelia's avatar

Eerie as fuck. I loved the vibe. That voice is haunting. I love the full commitment because it just made this such a special experience. Looking forward to more!

Earl Nobdy's avatar

Luv that dying citrine star

Ramona Moth's avatar

ty for reading Earl !

William Melgar's avatar

I've been reading a lot of Blake lately, Ramona, so maybe this is a little bias, but this reminds me so much of his songs of I&E!! Especially the clod and the pebble or the other one about being a flower(?) idk but I love his stuff sm even tho most of it flies over me. But this reminds me so much of that stuff. Especially how you just take a friggin fridge(a fridge!) and make it so human!(the design is very human 🤖).

Good stuff Moth!

Ramona Moth's avatar

Blake is amazing! I can’t believe anything I wrote is resonant of his work. Thank u William !!

Adriane Lord's avatar

Wow I love this! 💙

Ramona Moth's avatar

thank you Adriane !! i soo love your style & all your work I’ve gotten to read so far

Adriane Lord's avatar

And same! ❤️

Adriane Lord's avatar

☺️ aww thank you so much 💓

Gavin Charles Penson's avatar

The pound for pound queen of substack poetry

Ramona Moth's avatar

thank you for the compliment & reading Gavin ! so enjoyed your spring Haikus recently

Gavin Charles Penson's avatar

Any time, I really think what you are doing blending poetry into multi media art is amazing

Brandon Smith's avatar

A beautifully grotesque cornucopia of soured connections and love mutating beyond its expiration date. I will never not be obsessed with the way you use language and color and texture. I think, as a writer, sometimes I like to sit in other's sandboxes and admire their pails and shovels--the words they choose and how they bend them. "Bulbward" is incredible.

Ramona Moth's avatar

Your comments are always some of my favorite, i look forward to them . thank you for taking the time & always being so thoughtful . Truly means so much

Gustave Deresse's avatar

The audio ending is a treat.

Ramona Moth's avatar

thanks for reading & listening Gustave!!

Brother Rob's avatar

The atmosphere’s insane. Really impressed with how well you weave the sounds and the reading. 10/10

Ramona Moth's avatar

so grateful. Thanks again

Kia Nicole Tudor's avatar

neato potato

neal riggers's avatar

🔥🔥🔥🔥

Ramona Moth's avatar

thank u for reading !!