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Nick Hills's avatar

This lines are my favorites and you made me want to quit smoking 😁! I love your poetry, I can feel the passion! Let's read each other if you like, have a wonderful day!

Ramona Moth's avatar

Hahaha I can’t promise I’m quitting anytime soon 😭 but I’m honored it had that effect. Thank you for such a thoughtful comment, and reading my work. Your parking lot piece felt like urban folklore. That “they smell mold, but they are the mold” line is absolutely going to stick with me. Can’t wait to read more. Have a great day yourself!(:

Cipher⁉️✨✨'s avatar

The amalgamation of lines can be some of the rawest poetry I love it!

Ramona Moth's avatar

ty for reading, Cipher !! (:

Keiichiro Iwamoto's avatar

Feels like walking through someone’s dream—dark, strange, but strangely warm at the same time.